RosieUV's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Family violence]

to add to the power of the movements, make then sharper and quicker; adding force. to keep it looking relatively smooth add a couple of smear frames in.

[Skin condition]

i wish there was more at the end

Twoeliz responds:

Honestly, same. The challenge I gave myself was to make 32 animations, each of them must have been completed within a week or less. Most of them took about 3-5 days so there wasn't a lot of content I could put in. However I was thinking about doing longer versions of some of them one day if there was demand for it. If this one is one that you feel it would benefit from a longer short I will strongly consider it.

[MMD I fantasy punk miku]

the other 2 mikus don't have shadows and it's really bothering me

Trollsome responds:

I forgot to turn off shadow on the main miku

[How Men Proposed in the 1800s]

and this is why feminism exists

[ONE LAST CHIP!]

hmm... never had this problem

[Radical: A Radical Christmas]

the line thing across the screen is cool, but try adding a VHS effect overlay to add to the retro effect

[Get Off!]

it's funny, maybe tone down the boiler lines

[Wrapping Presents be like|| Christmas]

what exactly is the joke here?

[Warrior's Christmas memory]

reminds me of the AvA series on yt

the story and the animation are quite good, maybe don't as so many sound effects

what program was this made in? i'm curious

dgshooter responds:

I use Macromedia flash 8 for all my videos

[new animation Trailer!]

hmmm.... the animation would seem more fluent if you redrew each frame (or part of a frame) when movement is occurring.
if the paper tweening like animation is on purpose then try adding more joints and more parts moving at once to seem more realistic.
The artstyle isn't too bad, but i suggest adding some form of lineart to make the characters stand out more.